Hello. Please, feedback if possible! Thank you very much!

Hello Project Owner,
Thank you for inviting me with your project.
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes. If you don't like the design simply eliminate it, but don't rate it with 1, 2, 3 star.
Possible comment on my design would be much appreciated.
Thanks & regards,
Slant Line Media

Hello there, Project owner.

I've submitted 3 logo concepts according to your brief. I pretty much hope you'll like it.
Please check those designs and give me your feedback if you have time.
And also, suggest any changes you want. I am always happy to work.

Thank you,
Arun.