feedback please #20766757 and #20766758, regards

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #20776862...

thanks..

Hi there,

Your feedback on the following proposals it will be
very appreciated.

#20780043
#20780160

Kind regards,

sir your contest is going to pending , i hope you will consider about my work when you take your decision , thanks

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

If you want completely new one and if you have a sketch or thought ..please explain ?

Give me another chance .