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Hello,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
Thank you

I am really liking your logo you created. I would want to make sure the lower case "h" does not look like a "b" is there a way to bring the lines down a tiny bit to make sure it looks like an "h" without losing your awesome script design here. Thank you for participating. This is one of my top favorites right now.

Nice work on my logo. I like the contrast of fonts. and I love the "ah" You and the other designer that chose this "ah" are in my top two. There is something else I want from yours but can't seem to figure out what or how to tell you. Maybe the AWAREHOUSE needs something??? but then I don't want it to be too busy either.

I am really liking your logo you created. I would want to make sure the lower case "h" does not look like a "b" is there a way to bring the lines down a tiny bit to make sure it looks like an "h" without losing your awesome script design here. Thank you for participating. This is one of my top favorites right now. And can you play around with fonts on the AWAREHOUSE? I like the one you are using but feel it may be too much like restoration hardware font.

Please incorporate the words"ah" in script font. Either on it's own or in a circle. Or half in the circle and half out of the circle, along with the full words AWAREHOUSE. I am looking to use the "ah" on small items like an apparel tag.