Healthy Heart, Healthy Brain Poster for American Indian Older Adults

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by Arsalaan on Friday, September 14, 2018

Do I need to add Key steps for a healthy mind, heart, and body into the poster ?


by Project Owner on Friday, September 14, 2018

Yes all the text (except the highlighted instructions) in the word document need to be incorporated into the poster.


by Project Owner on Friday, September 14, 2018

Thanks for asking. Originally we thought yes, but seeing your design it will be too much text for a poster. The only other text from that list we want to try to add is:
Make an appointment with your doctor today to talk about how to keep your mind and heart healthy.

[Note: i've updated the design brief and word document we attached with the new text. Thanks!]


by Arsalaan on Friday, September 14, 2018

Can you give your feedback on my designs for now ?
Thank You.


by Project Owner on Friday, September 14, 2018

I've sent the design comps to my work group to solicit feedback once I hear from them i will share some more details but I do know the black font on such a dark grey background won't work- it's not high enough contrast. For older adults you must have high contrast. Also, it was supposed to be in earth tones. For the American Indian audience I'm not sure the grey color you choose would be the best choice (even though it would be earth tone). Think literal earth, land, water, etc. Perhaps something warmer? I find the way the numbers are displayed for the infographic portion and the size of the font and how it's presented in the teardrop draws all the attention to the # and not the text that goes with it. And by infographic -type display we were originally thinking for example for 1 in 3 American Indian stat it might have a small graphic of 3 bodies with one of them shaded and the other two not -- some visual display to help represent each of the #s. The way you've done it could work but needs revisualizing. I definitely do not like the first one that has the brain on plain background with the heart up in the corner for a lot of reasons. I like incorporating a visual of the heart but the one used has too much detail and it sort of looks like it was just dropped in there. Maybe consider incorporating some type of visualization of the "river" concept in the poster text. Those are just my quick thoughts. First time we've used DesignCrowd before, so not sure if that's the type of feedback you are looking for??


by Arsalaan on Friday, September 14, 2018

I am sorry, I don't exactly know how design crowd works for clients, but this is a comment section, you have to give the feedback on the designs submitted. I have submitted a revised design.


by aneela on Thursday, September 20, 2018

Hi, can I have some feedback. Thanks


by Project Owner on Thursday, September 27, 2018

Thanks aneela, our team just met today to review and like a lot of your stuff. Just asked to seee some new version of designs today.


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