I have updated the brief with 2 new images. I'd like the text to be a little more custom and more connected. I like the way that the wave text is connected and kind of looks like is from the ocean

I have updated the brief with 2 new images. I'd like the text to be a little more custom and more connected. I like the way that the wave text is connected and kind of looks like is from the ocean

I have updated the brief with 2 new images. I'd like the text to be a little more custom and more connected. I like the way that the wave text is connected and kind of looks like is from the ocean

I have updated the brief with 2 new images. I'd like the text to be a little more custom and more connected. I like the way that the wave text is connected and kind of looks like is from the ocean

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Feedback on design no #19727090

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If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

If you want completely new one and if you have a sketch or thought ..please explain ?

Give me another chance .