Please Check my design

what exactly you have in mind ? can You please explain so we can re think ?
I weould like to request you to explain me your thoughts so i can again try
i want to learn from my mistakes .. give me one more chance and explain what exactly you want ?

feedback please

Hi to all , that have started to design.
I would like to see you come up with a design with your opion that suits my industry.

Hi
I would like to see you come up with a design with your opion that suits my industry.

Hi
I would like to see you come up with a design with your opinon that suits my industry.

Hi all
Im enjoying the new designs , your on the right track.
Something more simplistic, consistant font ( cursieve writing). And to be unique.