Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Thank You.

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Hi. Thanks to the designs from you and others in this contest, I've fine-tuned the vision for what I'd like. Please see the basic concept at https://www.janglo.net/images/logoconcept.png

We're designing the star from little dots (points of light?), with a strong orange check-mark (looking like it is written with marker) along the right, making up some of the lines. The check extends upward past the line of the star. The motif of success/efficiency should be clear to the viewer immediately.

A few things I'm not sure of:
Should the dots be only blue, or multiple colors? (I went with lighter blue and green in one version)
I think there should be something on the lower right corner of the star to fill out the image, but I'm not exactly sure what it should be.

The logo should be very memorable, beautiful, and inspiring. The dots should clearly form a Jewish star, but add whatever flairs you think will work best, and please be creative!

Thanks.

Hi. Thanks to the designs from you and others in this contest, I've fine-tuned the vision for what I'd like. Please see the basic concept at https://www.janglo.net/images/logoconcept.png

We're designing the star from little dots (points of light?), with a strong orange check-mark (looking like it is written with marker) along the right, making up some of the lines. The check extends upward past the line of the star. The motif of success/efficiency should be clear to the viewer immediately.

A few things I'm not sure of:
Should the dots be only blue, or multiple colors? (I went with lighter blue and green in one version)
I think there should be something on the lower right corner of the star to fill out the image, but I'm not exactly sure what it should be.

The logo should be very memorable, beautiful, and inspiring. The dots should clearly form a Jewish star, but add whatever flairs you think will work best, and please be creative!

Thanks.

Hi. Thanks to the designs from you and others in this contest, I've fine-tuned the vision for what I'd like. Please see the basic concept at https://www.janglo.net/images/logoconcept.png

We're designing the star from little dots (points of light?), with a strong orange check-mark (looking like it is written with marker) along the right, making up some of the lines. The check extends upward past the line of the star. The motif of success/efficiency should be clear to the viewer immediately.

A few things I'm not sure of:
Should the dots be only blue, or multiple colors? (I went with lighter blue and green in one version)
I think there should be something on the lower right corner of the star to fill out the image, but I'm not exactly sure what it should be.

The logo should be very memorable, beautiful, and inspiring. The dots should clearly form a Jewish star, but add whatever flairs you think will work best, and please be creative!

Thanks.