Feedback please.

please check my designs :)

Hello Can I have some feedback? thanks :)

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please check my new design, thanks :)

need more update?
thanks

Please Feedback ! (#18490425) (#18490424)

Hello,Thank you for your invitation.
I just submitted my designs thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

check my design #18505885 and #18505887 regards .....

read this again:

If this is not at all the direction you were looking for,
just eliminate this design. Please avoid leaving star ratings,
lower than 4, in this case as star ratings are about designers,
and finished designs rather than drafts and suggestions.

don't spoil the rating of designers, they spend their time to make your logo

Please let me know if my designs are on the right track? Thanks ;)