Can I please get some feedback? I'm just starting out (kind of) and I need some very honest criticism

For just starting out I like your Logo allot. I feel you grasp the ideas of what we are looking for. Is there anyway you could add cookies to your logo. We are going to sale sugar cookies, choc. chip ext. 

Yessir!! I'll get right on it!

I have submitted a few designs. Please provide feedback and any adjustments that could be made.

Thanks.

I've made some revisions to my original design. If I could get some feedback that'd be great

Hi! Sorry if this is a hassle or anything, but can I ask for feedback regarding the designs I submitted? It would really help me create a design based on what it is that your looking for should you do so. I hope this is not of any nuisance to you. Thank you, kindly, JK.

Hi! I've already sent two designs that tries to remedy the issues you have previously saw on the earlier submission I presented. I would like to have your feedback on both of them if you don't mind. Thank you and best wishes, JK.

Any revisions and or feedback on my design would be great if you have the chance. Thanks