Feedback please.

Great designs, thank you for all the submissions so far! Please consider that the design will be embroidered on a wide selection of clothing. As the word FOCUS is the basis of our brand, the design needs to be clearly recognizable in the marketplace. I’m searching for best merge of marketability and recognition. I want outdoor enthusiasts to wear our brand proudly and publicly. Thanks again for everyone’s contribution!

Hello...can I have your feedback if you dont mind?

revised design submitted

check my entry please #18269034

Thank you for the amazing submissions, simply overwhelming response. Surprisingly, the designs I have been most interested in have incorporated an abstract design to the logo. It gives us the flexibility to market both as FOCUS Outfitters and the design itself either alone or in conjunction. The design needs to be original artwork, as it cannot be confused with other brands in the market for maximum recognition.

Again, amazing talent so far. Thanks to each of you for taking interest in this competition and your efforts. Greatly appreciated.

hello....can i have your feedback for my new one design submitted ? :)