Greetings,

May you cancel the 2.5star rating so that i can submit my design ?

thank you.

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hi I am designer from Hong Kong.
I would like to ask for the specific details of the design.
I will have no problem translating the words for you.
I see that the words are fro a pamphlet. Would you mind specifying if you just want the words to be translated or a design with the translation done.

Yours sincerely,
Ryan

Hi Ryan,

We are going to manufacture a gift box and already have a prototype available.Each section is for a panel on the box.The box manufacturer will align the copy into the panel size.
I just need the copy translated into Mandarin.Every section with (Mandarin) at the top needs to be translated.

Regards,

Grant

Dear Grant,

I am half way through the translation and would upload you the file right away.
The only problem I'm having is that I do not have enough star to qualify for submission.
As a template of my work:
A) Front Panel of Box (English)
MicrOrganics
??? or ???? (translated into nano organics, but sounds tinier in chinese)
GREEN NUTRITIONALS
????
World's Most Nutrient-Rich
??????? or ????? (nutritional rich) or ?????????? (most nutrient rich amonst similar product) (the latter two are better since it does not sound natural with direct translation)
SUPERFOODS 
????

I know there are in traditional Chinese characters and I can convert them into simplified ones for a wider coverage of the Chinese population. Those of which I cannot directly translate, I will provide you with the colloquially-suitable alternative and its meaning.
If you are satisfied with my work, would you please take out the rating requirement so I can upload you my work once I am done?

Yours sincerely,
Ryan

Dear Grant,

I just figured that the Chinese words are not able to be shown properly in the comment section. But I have done the translation. So just at the tip of your finger, I can submit once the settings are changed.

Yours sincerely,
Ryan

Hi ryan,

I have removed the star settings and are looking forward to receiving your submission.

Regards,
Grant

Hi Ryan,

After selecting your design a screen popped up and said you have to finish the work within 7 days to receive payment.There is no need for you to stick to this deadline. As per my earlier message Im on annual leave until 5 April so happy for you to take your time.

Regards,

Grant Tosio
grant@greennutritionals.com.au

Dear Mr Grant,

Thank you very much for your prompt response. I put all the translation under each of the corresponding sentences or passages and added remarks whenever necessary. I have already uploaded the word version in zip as well as the PDF for you. Please do enjoy your holiday and feel free to message me if you find there is anything to add.

I am not sure about if the 7 days deadline has to be met i.e. my work has to be approved by you in the system. But I can still put the work through email or message over here so please do confirm the work once you feel like you are contented. Please do enjoy your holiday. It has been a pleasure working with you.

Yours sincerely,
Ryan

Hi Ryan,

Thanks for your prompt response,I have made a few changes,please edit the Mandarin to ensure its grammatically correct and sounds like something you would read on packaging .

Black copy original
Underneath is Grants’ edited Mandarin translation
Ryan place grammatically correct Mandarin beneath

Front Panel of Box (don’t translate stays in English)
MicrOrganics
GREEN NUTRITIONALS
World's Most Nutrient-Rich
SUPERFOODS

B) Top Panel - left hand side (don’t translate stays in English)
Australian Made and Owned

C) Top Panel - right hand side (Mandarin)
Australian Made and Owned
?????????


D) Pullout LH side (inside) (Mandarin)
World's Best
??????


100% Australian Organic
???????????
100%??????

WHEATGRASS
???

+ half page copy (see below) (Mandarin)

World's Best
??????


Organic Pure Plant-Source
???????


GREEN CALCIUM
???


Nature's Perfect Calcium
??????

+ half page copy (see below)




E) Back of Pullout LH side (outside) (Mandarin)

Why we are the BEST!
?????????!


1 AUSTRALIAN MADE & OWNED
??????&??


MicrOrganics GREEN NUTRITIONALS is an Australian owned company since 1995 that manufactures in Australia under GMP licence.
1.????????? MicrOrganics???????????????1995??????????GMP????????


2. GOOD MANUFACTURING PRACTICE (GMP)
2.???????(GMP)

All our superfoods are packaged in a licensed Australian GMP (Good Manufacturing Practice) facility, to ensure the highest quality control standards
????????????????????GMP(??????)???,????????????

3. NO OXIDATION
3.???

Our unique LOCTEC™ Nutrients Protection Technology effectively creates
an oxygenless environment inside our glass bottles to protect the abundant antioxidants ... we cap it off with a metal lid that creates an effective seal to
keep the oxygen out and stop the loss of valuable nutrients that occurs with
oxygen permeable plastic packaging.
?????LOCTEC™??????????? ???????????,??????????......???????????,????????? ???????,????????????????? ???????


4. FULL DISCLOSURE
4.????

We genuinely choose our superfoods based on quality, potency and purity, NOT price ... that's why we're proud to tell you where on Earth they are grown and by whom - it's important to us and our customers appreciate it!
??????????,??????????,?????......???????????????,???????,???? - ??????????????!




5. ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION
5.????

NO pesticides, NO herbicides, NO chemicals, low water usage and no land, water or soil degradation in the production of our superfoods.
??????????????,????,????,????,???,????????



6. 100% RECYCLABLE PACKAGING
6. 100%?????


Helping reduce packaging waste pollution by using 100% recyclable glass and metal components is important to us and our environment.
????100%??????????????????????????????????


7. NO PLASTICS
7.????


We choose NOT to pack our pure Superfoods in plastic bottles with plastic caps ... the reasons are endless!
????????????????????????......???????!


F) A3 folded to 2 x A4 Portrait (inside)

Panel #1 (repeat on back side) (Mandarin)

Photo + Map + WG field (English)

Middle of A3 panel (Mandarin)
Founder and owner Mr John Mayger (CEO) overlooking the 100% Australian Organic Wheatgrass growing in the clean, green pollution-free Murray River region of Australia
NO Chemicals, NO Synthetics, NO Heavy Metals, NO Pollutants

???????John Mayger??(?????)????????,??????????????100%????????? NO????,NO????,NO???,NO???


(Magnified view of label 'organic, nutrient-rich, chemical-free soil')
Label: ‘??,????,?????'


Panel #2
Extended photo

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------



COPY (Mandarin)
World's Best
??????
100% Australian Organic
100%??????


WHEATGRASS
???

Australian Organic WHEATGRASS is made using 100% organic young leaf wheatgrass from the mineral-rich, certified organic soil on the banks of the mighty Murray River in Northern Victoria.
??????WHEATGRASS?????????????????????????????100%?????????


This organic young leaf wheatgrass delivers a broader spectrum of organic nutrients to alkalise and cleanse the body.
??????????????????????????????


The clean, pollution free environment where the organic farms grow Australian WHEATGRASS are certified by the leading Australian organic certification body The National Association for Sustainable Agriculture Australia (NASSA).
??????????????WHEATGRASS????????????????????????????????????(NASSA)????


Australian Organic WHEATGRASS contains NO gluten, NO dairy, NO fillers or bulking agents, NO synthetics, NO artificial colour or flavours, NO chemicals, NO pesticides or herbicides, NO heavy metals, NO animal products and is suitable for vegetarians and vegans.
??????WHEATGRASS?????,????,????????,NO????,????????,?????,???????,????,?????,????????????


Australian Organic WHEATGRASS is NOT juiced and it has NO additives. Juicing eliminates the natural plant fibre and requires chemical additives to prevent deterioration and facilitate the drying process.
Australian Organic WHEATGRASS

??????WHEATGRASS???,??????????????????,????????????????????? ??????WHEATGRASS


SUPERIOR DRYING & MILLING TECHNOLOGIES
?????????



Australian Organic WHEATGRASS is dried using special Low Temperature Drying Technology, then milled with an advanced Fine-Pin Milling System to produce a smaller particle size to preserve potency and increase nutrient bioavailability - NO 'flash-air drying' at high temperatures is used in the production of Australian Organic WHEATGRASS.
Australian Organic WHEATGRASS
??????WHEATGRASS???????????????,?????????????????,??????????????????????? - ???????“????”??????WHEATGRASS????
COPY (Mandarin)
World's Best
??????


Organic Pure Plant-Source
???????


GREEN CALCIUM
???

Nature's Perfect Calcium
??????


WHY TAKE REGULAR CALCIUM WHEN YOU CAN HAVE
A PURE PLANT-SOURCE OF CALCIUM?
???????????,?????? ????? - ?????
Taking a daily calcium supplement has become usual practice for people concerned
about bone and joint health, but what type of calcium supplement do you take?
Are you taking calcium derived from plants or rocks?
Did you know that 'Calcium Carbonate', 'Calcium Citrate', 'Calcium Gluconate' and 'Calcium Lactate' are processed from limestone and/or chalk and 'Calcium Hydroxyapatite' is derived
from crushed animal bones?
?????????????????? ??????????,??????????????? ?????????????? ?????“???”,“????”,“?????”?“???”??????/????????,??“?????”???? ???????

WHAT'S THE BEST FORM OF CALCIUM?
When considering what form of calcium to take, it's important to consider just how much of the calcium you consume is retained in the body by getting absorbed into your teeth and bones.
The bioavailability of the calcium you take is most important.
Science tells us that calcium in a natural food complex is the best form of calcium for long term consumption - our bodies use the calcium in plants and foods far better than they do calcium from non-plant and non-food sources.
?????????? ???????????,???????????????????????????? ????????????????? ??????,?????????????????? - ???????????????????????????????


WHAT IS GreenCALCIUM?
???????







A 100% pure, plant-source of calcium from the marine plant Lithothamnium calcareum, GreenCALCIUM is naturally rich in calcium, magnesium and 72 other trace minerals important for optimum calcium absorption and bone health.

This unique plant absorbs essential minerals and trace minerals from the ocean giving GreenCALCIUM a unique multi-mineral balance and a high 34% content of elemental calcium.
Pleasant tasting and easily mixed in drinks or added to any food, one (1) level teaspoon serving of GreenCALCIUM provides 950mg of elemental calcium in a multi-mineral food matrix.

??????Lithothamnium calcareum?100%???????,GreenCALCIUM????????,??72????????,?????????????????? ????????????????????????,?GreenCALCIUM???????????????34%??????? ????????????????????,?(1)??????GreenCALCIUM????????????950mg????




HOW IS IT GROWN?
The Lithothamnium calcareum used in GreenCALCIUM grows naturally in the clean, mineral rich Atlantic waters where, during a five-year life span, it absorbs minerals from the ocean. Because only mature-aged calcified plant is taken, there is no interference with the natural growth cycle.
Harvested under strict licence, the Lithothamnium calcareum is taken ashore to be washed and dried - nothing else is added to GreenCALCIUM, and sustainability of this valuable plant-source of calcium is assured.
???????? GreenCALCIUM????Lithothamnium calcareum???,???????????????,???????,???????????????????????,????????????? ?????????,Lithothamnium calcareum???????? - ????????????GreenCALCIUM,????????????????????




WHY IS GreenCALCIUM SO WELL ABSORBED IN THE BODY?

These 3 special features make GreenCALCIUM well absorbed and utilized in the body;
1. It has a unique porous 'honeycomb-like' structure
which reacts particularly well in the digestive system
giving it enhanced absorption properties.

2. Its molecule has a very large surface area. This allows faster solubility and
rapid ionisation of the calcium, resulting in better absorption.

3. It contains other important minerals necessary for the absorption of calcium
including magnesium, boron, selenium, zinc, strontium and iodine.

???GreenCALCIUM?????????
??????GreenCALCIUM??????????????; ????????“???”?? ??????????? ??????????? ???????????????????????? ?????,???????? ????????????????? ???,?,?,?,???


GreenCALCIUM CONTAINS:
-100% pure plant source calcium

-NO dairy products or gluten

-NO calcium chelates processed from limestone or chalk

-NO calcium hydroxyapatite crushed animal bones

-NO crushed coral or oyster shell

-NO animal products or by-products

-NO corn or wheat products

-NO Genetically Modified Organisms (GMO)

-NO herbicides, NO pesticides, NO contaminants

-GreenCALCIUM is the richest natural plant-source of calcium available, is highly alkaline (pH10) and suitable for vegetarians and vegans.
GreenCALCIUM??:
-100%??????
- ????????
-NO??????????????
-NO????????????
- ???????????
-NO???????? - ????????
-NO???????(GMO)
-NO???,???,????
-GreenCALCIUM???????????,?????(pH10),??????????
?
GreenCALCIUM is the richest natural plant-source of calcium available, is highly alkaline (pH10) and suitable for vegetarians and vegans
GreenCALCIUM????????????????,?????(pH10),???????????

Hi Ryan,

Thanks for your prompt response,I have made a few changes,please edit the Mandarin to ensure its grammatically correct and sounds like something you would read on packaging .

Black copy original
Underneath is Grants’ edited Mandarin translation
Ryan place grammatically correct Mandarin beneath

Front Panel of Box (don’t translate stays in English)
MicrOrganics
GREEN NUTRITIONALS
World's Most Nutrient-Rich
SUPERFOODS

B) Top Panel - left hand side (don’t translate stays in English)
Australian Made and Owned

C) Top Panel - right hand side (Mandarin)
Australian Made and Owned
?????????


D) Pullout LH side (inside) (Mandarin)
World's Best
??????


100% Australian Organic
???????????
100%??????

WHEATGRASS
???

+ half page copy (see below) (Mandarin)

World's Best
??????


Organic Pure Plant-Source
???????


GREEN CALCIUM
???


Nature's Perfect Calcium
??????

+ half page copy (see below)




E) Back of Pullout LH side (outside) (Mandarin)

Why we are the BEST!
?????????!


1 AUSTRALIAN MADE & OWNED
??????&??


MicrOrganics GREEN NUTRITIONALS is an Australian owned company since 1995 that manufactures in Australia under GMP licence.
1.????????? MicrOrganics???????????????1995??????????GMP????????


2. GOOD MANUFACTURING PRACTICE (GMP)
2.???????(GMP)

All our superfoods are packaged in a licensed Australian GMP (Good Manufacturing Practice) facility, to ensure the highest quality control standards
????????????????????GMP(??????)???,????????????

3. NO OXIDATION
3.???

Our unique LOCTEC™ Nutrients Protection Technology effectively creates
an oxygenless environment inside our glass bottles to protect the abundant antioxidants ... we cap it off with a metal lid that creates an effective seal to
keep the oxygen out and stop the loss of valuable nutrients that occurs with
oxygen permeable plastic packaging.
?????LOCTEC™??????????? ???????????,??????????......???????????,????????? ???????,????????????????? ???????


4. FULL DISCLOSURE
4.????

We genuinely choose our superfoods based on quality, potency and purity, NOT price ... that's why we're proud to tell you where on Earth they are grown and by whom - it's important to us and our customers appreciate it!
??????????,??????????,?????......???????????????,???????,???? - ??????????????!




5. ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION
5.????

NO pesticides, NO herbicides, NO chemicals, low water usage and no land, water or soil degradation in the production of our superfoods.
??????????????,????,????,????,???,????????



6. 100% RECYCLABLE PACKAGING
6. 100%?????


Helping reduce packaging waste pollution by using 100% recyclable glass and metal components is important to us and our environment.
????100%??????????????????????????????????


7. NO PLASTICS
7.????


We choose NOT to pack our pure Superfoods in plastic bottles with plastic caps ... the reasons are endless!
????????????????????????......???????!


F) A3 folded to 2 x A4 Portrait (inside)

Panel #1 (repeat on back side) (Mandarin)

Photo + Map + WG field (English)

Middle of A3 panel (Mandarin)
Founder and owner Mr John Mayger (CEO) overlooking the 100% Australian Organic Wheatgrass growing in the clean, green pollution-free Murray River region of Australia
NO Chemicals, NO Synthetics, NO Heavy Metals, NO Pollutants

???????John Mayger??(?????)????????,??????????????100%????????? NO????,NO????,NO???,NO???


(Magnified view of label 'organic, nutrient-rich, chemical-free soil')
Label: ‘??,????,?????'


Panel #2
Extended photo

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------



COPY (Mandarin)
World's Best
??????
100% Australian Organic
100%??????


WHEATGRASS
???

Australian Organic WHEATGRASS is made using 100% organic young leaf wheatgrass from the mineral-rich, certified organic soil on the banks of the mighty Murray River in Northern Victoria.
??????WHEATGRASS?????????????????????????????100%?????????


This organic young leaf wheatgrass delivers a broader spectrum of organic nutrients to alkalise and cleanse the body.
??????????????????????????????


The clean, pollution free environment where the organic farms grow Australian WHEATGRASS are certified by the leading Australian organic certification body The National Association for Sustainable Agriculture Australia (NASSA).
??????????????WHEATGRASS????????????????????????????????????(NASSA)????


Australian Organic WHEATGRASS contains NO gluten, NO dairy, NO fillers or bulking agents, NO synthetics, NO artificial colour or flavours, NO chemicals, NO pesticides or herbicides, NO heavy metals, NO animal products and is suitable for vegetarians and vegans.
??????WHEATGRASS?????,????,????????,NO????,????????,?????,???????,????,?????,????????????


Australian Organic WHEATGRASS is NOT juiced and it has NO additives. Juicing eliminates the natural plant fibre and requires chemical additives to prevent deterioration and facilitate the drying process.
Australian Organic WHEATGRASS

??????WHEATGRASS???,??????????????????,????????????????????? ??????WHEATGRASS


SUPERIOR DRYING & MILLING TECHNOLOGIES
?????????



Australian Organic WHEATGRASS is dried using special Low Temperature Drying Technology, then milled with an advanced Fine-Pin Milling System to produce a smaller particle size to preserve potency and increase nutrient bioavailability - NO 'flash-air drying' at high temperatures is used in the production of Australian Organic WHEATGRASS.
Australian Organic WHEATGRASS
??????WHEATGRASS???????????????,?????????????????,??????????????????????? - ???????“????”??????WHEATGRASS????
COPY (Mandarin)
World's Best
??????


Organic Pure Plant-Source
???????


GREEN CALCIUM
???

Nature's Perfect Calcium
??????


WHY TAKE REGULAR CALCIUM WHEN YOU CAN HAVE
A PURE PLANT-SOURCE OF CALCIUM?
???????????,?????? ????? - ?????
Taking a daily calcium supplement has become usual practice for people concerned
about bone and joint health, but what type of calcium supplement do you take?
Are you taking calcium derived from plants or rocks?
Did you know that 'Calcium Carbonate', 'Calcium Citrate', 'Calcium Gluconate' and 'Calcium Lactate' are processed from limestone and/or chalk and 'Calcium Hydroxyapatite' is derived
from crushed animal bones?
?????????????????? ??????????,??????????????? ?????????????? ?????“???”,“????”,“?????”?“???”??????/????????,??“?????”???? ???????

WHAT'S THE BEST FORM OF CALCIUM?
When considering what form of calcium to take, it's important to consider just how much of the calcium you consume is retained in the body by getting absorbed into your teeth and bones.
The bioavailability of the calcium you take is most important.
Science tells us that calcium in a natural food complex is the best form of calcium for long term consumption - our bodies use the calcium in plants and foods far better than they do calcium from non-plant and non-food sources.
?????????? ???????????,???????????????????????????? ????????????????? ??????,?????????????????? - ???????????????????????????????


WHAT IS GreenCALCIUM?
???????







A 100% pure, plant-source of calcium from the marine plant Lithothamnium calcareum, GreenCALCIUM is naturally rich in calcium, magnesium and 72 other trace minerals important for optimum calcium absorption and bone health.

This unique plant absorbs essential minerals and trace minerals from the ocean giving GreenCALCIUM a unique multi-mineral balance and a high 34% content of elemental calcium.
Pleasant tasting and easily mixed in drinks or added to any food, one (1) level teaspoon serving of GreenCALCIUM provides 950mg of elemental calcium in a multi-mineral food matrix.

??????Lithothamnium calcareum?100%???????,GreenCALCIUM????????,??72????????,?????????????????? ????????????????????????,?GreenCALCIUM???????????????34%??????? ????????????????????,?(1)??????GreenCALCIUM????????????950mg????




HOW IS IT GROWN?
The Lithothamnium calcareum used in GreenCALCIUM grows naturally in the clean, mineral rich Atlantic waters where, during a five-year life span, it absorbs minerals from the ocean. Because only mature-aged calcified plant is taken, there is no interference with the natural growth cycle.
Harvested under strict licence, the Lithothamnium calcareum is taken ashore to be washed and dried - nothing else is added to GreenCALCIUM, and sustainability of this valuable plant-source of calcium is assured.
???????? GreenCALCIUM????Lithothamnium calcareum???,???????????????,???????,???????????????????????,????????????? ?????????,Lithothamnium calcareum???????? - ????????????GreenCALCIUM,????????????????????




WHY IS GreenCALCIUM SO WELL ABSORBED IN THE BODY?

These 3 special features make GreenCALCIUM well absorbed and utilized in the body;
1. It has a unique porous 'honeycomb-like' structure
which reacts particularly well in the digestive system
giving it enhanced absorption properties.

2. Its molecule has a very large surface area. This allows faster solubility and
rapid ionisation of the calcium, resulting in better absorption.

3. It contains other important minerals necessary for the absorption of calcium
including magnesium, boron, selenium, zinc, strontium and iodine.

???GreenCALCIUM?????????
??????GreenCALCIUM??????????????; ????????“???”?? ??????????? ??????????? ???????????????????????? ?????,???????? ????????????????? ???,?,?,?,???


GreenCALCIUM CONTAINS:
-100% pure plant source calcium

-NO dairy products or gluten

-NO calcium chelates processed from limestone or chalk

-NO calcium hydroxyapatite crushed animal bones

-NO crushed coral or oyster shell

-NO animal products or by-products

-NO corn or wheat products

-NO Genetically Modified Organisms (GMO)

-NO herbicides, NO pesticides, NO contaminants

-GreenCALCIUM is the richest natural plant-source of calcium available, is highly alkaline (pH10) and suitable for vegetarians and vegans.
GreenCALCIUM??:
-100%??????
- ????????
-NO??????????????
-NO????????????
- ???????????
-NO???????? - ????????
-NO???????(GMO)
-NO???,???,????
-GreenCALCIUM???????????,?????(pH10),??????????
?
GreenCALCIUM is the richest natural plant-source of calcium available, is highly alkaline (pH10) and suitable for vegetarians and vegans
GreenCALCIUM????????????????,?????(pH10),???????????