I like the movement of brush strokes, like an enzo, love the beautiful fonts, but agree with feedback: "must have immediate impact;" "be easy to read" and because this is "mindful nature walks", the figure(s) need to be walking, standing, gazing, touching a tree - not sitting.

I read Simon Sinek's "Start with Why". My Why is "inspiring nature reconnection in our virtual age". From Chris Anderson's "TED Talks", my "through line" for talking about this is: "being outdoors can actually make us happy, healthy and more creative."

I appreciate your working with me on this! I will be deciding on winner(s) very soon!

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2-13-18 Miracle: Animal Interactions in Nature for simple drawings about this practice, but include people standing, walking, gazing, touching or smelling a leaf or other forest being.

Also, there are a few photos in the following article to show figures forest bathing:

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Here a person is touching water in nature near an urban world:

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