Please see updated brief regarding the "dojo" aspect of our business name.

Please check our design and reply some feedback for improve the design.

Feedback please

Please check my design and reply some feedback for improve the design

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Thank you!

Best regards,
Coco

Feedback Please