Hi, feedback for any required changes on my design would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

I've submitted some creative design proposals for your
logo design according to your brief. Please provide your
feedback either to improve or move on with these designs.

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Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions.
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/17589579
Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply. Thanks