Please check our design and reply some feedback for improve the design.

Hi Sir
I hope the adjustment is good for you.
Yasser

Please any comment and fedback on my design..

Regards

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Thank you!

Best regards,
Coco

There's a contradiction, you say East Coast hip hop but in the updates West Coast? What gives?

Feedback Please