send me a feedback please...thanks

I really like the first and second logo i have attached.
Would like to see a few ideas similar to those!

(Tod Knaus & Home build)

Hi, I've submitted a creative design regarding to your brief any feedback will be too much appreciated.
Thank you and God bless.

Send feedback please! thank you!

Hi have a look at my new design according to your brief updated. (#16625752). Please provide some feedback for improvements any suggestion would be helpful in finding perfect design for you.

Thank you.