Feedback please.

feedback please

Hi sir any feedback please

Dear Sir,

I would greatly appreciate it if you kindly look at my submitted concept [#14829341] and provide me some comments.

It’s an original, essentialist, main concept; but I can still take the idea and – slightly - tune the tone… or even change the text (Dr[X]) ...

Although I sincerely believe that it is graphically well balanced.

If required I can also provide some illustrative mockups.

Thank You,

Pedro