Hi,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Thanks for your invitation.

Hi . Logo design has been submitted . I'm looking forward for your valuable feedback for improvements.
Thank you and God bless.

Regards,
Gr4pika

Looking forward to your feedback.
Thanks in advance!
(Also: you mentioned you want a version with web address included, but I didn't find anywhere in your brief the name of your website? The domain futuretoys.com does not exist)

Any news in here??