Thanx. I didn't notice it was before deadline.

It seems that we must keep talking here, and I really need some infos to continue. References are the main issue:

Myri is a real child. I believe her mother must be based upon her real mother.
What's the country? It' makes difference in which side of the road traffic drives on.
If they're real people, will the ballet theatre be a real theatre?

And just a little observation, in page 6, "in her bed she laid her bed"... head?

Best wishes,
Cesar.

The country is the US, do you have an email address that I can send the picture to? I also have made revision to the story.
Nicolas

I am awaiting an answer from Design Crowd if now I am alowed because I was not until now, 7.1:
http://www.designcrowd.com/special-terms-and-conditions

Thanks for pointing this out Cesar, I did not know let me figure out a way to give you your requested items.

Cesar, I just emailed DesignCrowd support with the revisions. They said they will review and send it over to you.

Recieved, great! I recieved a message in another page, I think that's more appopriate, i'll sent a message there.