Feedback on my design please.

Think simple, memorable, lasting and if you choose to create a logo rather than just typeface it can be anything, an animal etc. It can be an abstract letter etc.

Revised design submitted

can i have a feedback please thank you

Hello. How can I improve my submission vs your requirements? Thank you for the feedback.

Please tell me how I can improve my design so it meets your requirements. Thank you.

Hi, I have submitted three logos, can you please check and please provide me your feedback.
Thank you.

looking forward for your response.

Hello

Thank you for your feedback. Best of luck finding a terrific logo.