feedback would be much appreciated :)

Hello. Dear project owner.
could you provide us any feedback please? If you have any questions please let us know.
We look forward to your response. Thank you.

Hi they all seem a bit to sinister, more professional please.

Design King, I am not seeing a design submission for you. Can you resubmitt?

Becuase almost a month went by and u werent communicating, so i withdrew my entry.