Some additional feedback from our side.
1. We want "Business Technology Group" to be more dominant than Carnegie Mellon in the logo.
2. The logo will go on a site very similar in feel and look to [Non image link removed]3. The color choice that may look good is a combination or red and black or the dofferent shades of white as used on logo of [Non image link removed]

kindly review my entry and give me feedback. Thanks

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changes made on this entry (#12233739). let me know what you think