feedback please

Hello. Dear sir.
could you provide us any feedback please? If you have any questions please let us know. We are ready to make your request. We look forward to your response.
Thank you.

Hi,
Thank you for submitting your designs. We are still the process of receiving designs and will begin a short listing process next week. I will be in contact with you thereafter should your designs be selected.

Thank You

feedback please so i can improve my work