"Trinki" Mobile banking for Young People

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by Black Graphic on Thursday, March 10, 2016

Feedback please :)


by w92n on Tuesday, March 15, 2016

not that i'm surprised. but this customer clearly has no understanding of kerning.

sad.


by Project Owner on Tuesday, March 15, 2016

I think that your design is unreadable. You didn't understand our needs. How you mention about kerning? :)


by w92n on Tuesday, March 15, 2016

this wasn't supposed to be about my design vs anyone else's i was simply pointing out that the kerning in the one you chose was haphazard.

kerning: the visual spacing between letters. the spacing between the T and r, (too wide) and the n and k (WAY too tight).

i don't mid that you don't care for my design. taste, as well as the understanding of the function of a logo is subjective. but i take issue when you say that i "didn't understand" your needs. let's look closer at your needs, as stated by you:

in your brief, you said "We targets teens between 10 - 18 years old"
and "Teens between 10 to 18 in Turkey AND Family members."

ultimately, i think the design you chose appeals more to 4-7 year olds and completely NOT 8-18 nor OLDER family members.
my approach was to make something fun enough to appeal to youths. but complex enough to be interesting to the older teens and adults.

i also kept true to the colors that you presented. the one you chose added yellow.

again. i don't begrudge you your taste. that's totally up to you. but when you say that i didn't understand your needs. THAT, i will argue.


by w92n on Tuesday, March 15, 2016

i'll also point out that one of the two reference logos you provided. "buxx" could have been read as buDoc or bucoc. so i was under the impression that you wanted something with a little ambiguity to it's perception.

again. i'm not bothered that you didn't choose my work. but i am bothered when you give me a low review and say that i didn't understand your needs. when in fact i probably understand them better than you do.

: (


by Project Owner on Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Thank you. Yes it is a matter of taste. May be next time.

Best Regards


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