Please comment on my work as I can fully adjust it.

Please comment on my work as I can fully adjust it.

Please comment on my work as I can fully adjust it.

Hello,
I would love to see this project guaranteed.
Best regards,
Coco

Dear Madame/Sir,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me any feedback?
And please tell me if I am on the right track.Thank you!
And again, I would love to see this project guaranteed.

Best regards,
Coco

Hi,

First of all I want to thank you for the invitation to work on this project.
I've submitted a proposal for your design, and if is possible I would appreciate any kind of feedback from you so I can adapt my future proposals to your needs.

Best Regards!