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Yes got it. Made changes. Please take a look now.

CLEAN but FANCY and substantial/profound PLEASE

Create at your best!
This is for a new engagement ring store at the heart of Manhattan New York in the diamond district. It is on the cutting edge of technology and consists of a modern website, mobile app and brick and mortar store. We already have thousands of clients for the other type of jewelry that we sell, and now we are taking this new project to make it a #1 global tool. This logo will be seen by millions of people and must be high quality, attractive, and catchy/distinctive. If the design is good you will have the whole Diamond District of New York as your clients. Do your best and we will make sure you happy.

PLEASE: ENGAGEMENT RING and EXPRESS should be visually separated

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Hi, Here is my logo proposal for you, Can you Please send me your feedback and let me know if this is close to your wishes.
Thank you.