Hi,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

I am overwhelmed by the outstanding work you have each done. If I could work out how to give private feedback, I would do so. Feel free to enlighten me. I will certainly be promoting this process to my business colleagues as an exciting way to source insightful designs.
I look forward to making the decision over the weekend.
Thank you so very much :)