feedback please

Hi,

I've submitted a design.
Would be great to get your feedback, and please do not hesitate to ask for changes.

Kind regards,

My boss still does not 100% like any of the designs submitted. He was hoping to get a few more options before making a decision.

On your design, the ribbon lettering was too abstract. We are looking for something more clean lined, bold, leaning towards a red and black and white theme...or a navy blue and gray theme...something simple but stately. Does this help any?

hello,
Do you have any new about the project?
thanks.