Can I have feedback on my design please? Thank you :)

Thank you everyone who has submitted your designs so far. There are so really great choices - however Vetroff has set the bar high! His design is sleek and is oozing luxury! Hope to see some more contenders soon as our deadline is approaching!

Hi,
I have submit my first proposal for your logo, so any feedback will be welcoming.

Best Regards,
Black Graphic