Hello, i just submitted my design concept, any feedback regarding such would be appreciated, cheers!

feedback please

Thank you all so much for your logos so far! A couple designers have used the Bunker Hill Memorial Bridge ([Non image link removed]which is a landmark in Boston. It would be great to somehow see that incorporated into the design!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leonard_P._Zakim_Bunker_Hill_Memorial_Bridge#/media/File:Leonard_P._Zakim_Bunker_Hill_Bridge_-_Boston,_MA_crop.jpg